Analysis of FRAGMENTS



FRAGMENTS
 

 
We're the "lords" and "masters"        
                                                                 They're the "servants",      

So they said,

And from among us they came

Canvassing for our "thumbs" to serve

A child of our agitation?

They vowed faithfulness, milk and honey                                 

They pledged loyalty, bread and butter                                                                                          
We paused

And like ants we filled out-

Defiling the elements,

Defiling our rumbling and riotous belly

And gave them our 'thumbs' to serve

But how soon they reneged

And they were our members

We sang same sour songs

We ate from same battered plates

We drank from same leaky cups

We slept on same loosening mat

Now we're two parallel lines

See them cruising on exotic wheels

Building castles on the hills                  
                                                                   Filling their tables with sumptuous

And surrounding themselves with

But here we are, forsaken

In our huts like hen,

Cattle or sheep confined in the pen

The roof letting in drizzles to a tide

Our tables empty and dry like a smoking

Our sole shoe  soles witnesses to scores
                                                                          of Yuletide
 
But these Pharoahs

We desire Moses's liberation and

We seek Joshua's lead to Rest.


Scheme A BA X X C D E XX X A E C X B X X X X X X XX X D F F G X XG X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 10 1 1 101010 1010 111 0101111 100110111 01110010 1111010 111001010 11 011111 10100 110100010010 01110111 111101 0101010 111101 1111101 1111101 11111001 111101 111010101 1010101 10110110 0010011 1111010 010111 101101001 011001101 101010011010 1011110011 11 1 1110 101010100 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,790
Words 278
Sentences 4
Stanzas 30
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 4, 1, 1
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 9

About this poem

In Nigeria politics has become a lucrative business where those who had nothing before getting into political office suddenly become affluent. They go to the electorates with sugar-coated tongues to seek for votes to "serve"; but in reality their purpose of seeking political office is only to enrich themselves at the expense of the poor masses who continue to hope for a "saviour."

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Written on November 02, 2022

Submitted by Emek on November 02, 2022

Modified on April 03, 2023

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Eme Eke

Eme Eke is my name,43, a Nigerian and currently residing in Nigeria. A graduate of English and Literature from the University of Benin, Benin City, Nigeria. Formerly worked at United Africa Company (UAC) but now in private business. A lover of poems. I love reading, travelling and watching cartoons and comedies. more…

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