Analysis of Realms of the unspoken & Broken

Buddy Lyric 1989 (California)



In silence
We lingered, late nights
Wide awake, weary & withered
 Holding our precious possessions
So tight, they suffocated
Big mistake
Thinking we controlled our fate
You were key
I was lock upon the gates
We built together, our isolated paradise
We feel like strangers now
That world so unfamiliar
No more rock
No more pillar
Always, figured there was time
Time to grow, time to rise
See the beauty, behind the lies
Lord knows
Our story goes
Unholy places, haunted by ghost
Unknowingly dead,  the fog and smoke
Clouded our Mind
Smothered our soul
What happens now?
I fear
We may never know...


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Poetic Form
Metre 010 11011 1011010 101010010 111100 101 10101101 101 1110101 110101010010 111101 111010 111 1110 110111 111111 10100101 11 10101 010101011 010010101 10101 10101 1101 11 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 625
Words 109
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 476
Words per stanza (avg) 105
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Written on December 04, 2022

Submitted by calikingpen707 on December 04, 2022

Modified by calikingpen707 on December 04, 2022

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Buddy Lyric

Just a man on the path of finding himself. I've been into writing since the late night of my 7yr old birthday. I found it to be the only mirror from which I recognized my own reflection. Beneath the chaos I constructed my ground zero. I broke ground to a foundation I truly created from fire and Ash. more…

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