Analysis of Him



I wish I had the nerves to tell HIM how I really feel
Is it wrong?
that I feel so strong
about a man who warned me from the start
all I want to do is make him happy but I'm hesitant at times because I'm scared he'll break my heart
I wake up thinking about him
and wish that every moment spent together would last forever
I want him to feel comfortable telling me when he's upset with life
and I want HIM to know.... that... I love him...I respect him
and I want to be his partner, his best friend, and someday his wife
I want him to be able to confide in me
and speak and express what's on his mind with me
I want to see him smile...and I want to see him cry
I want to see the "True Side" of him...please don't ask why
I get so wrapped up in my emotions and I shouldn't let them show
but this man is special and
I just feel that the world needs to know
I want to tackle everyday life situations with him
one on one
and I want our families combined together
and for him to know, he will always be 2nd to none


Scheme ABBCCDEFDFGGHHIJIDKEK
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111111101 111 11111 0101111101 1111111110111001101111111 11110011 01110010101011010 111111000101110111 0111111111011 011111101110111 111111010101 01001111111 111111111111 111101111111 11111010100110111 1111100 111101111 11110101101011 111 0111010001010 011111111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,009
Words 216
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 769
Words per stanza (avg) 210
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Written on October 02, 2018

Submitted by s.i.s on November 28, 2022

Modified by s.i.s on December 11, 2022

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Sarah Lateesha Hamilton

I am Proud American. I am a retired Army vet who served 20yrs defending the rights for our country. I'm a loving single mother and momma's girl. I put my family 1st. I have been writing poetry since the age of 10 and writing is my passion. I love to love. We only have one life ( that we can remember) so I live my life to the fullest more…

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