Analysis of Cutting the Cord



cutting the cord (for Ryan)

you traveled life’s first journey
through the tight narrow tunnel
the bloody walls
the dark ravine
then out into the world
into the light
immediately inhaling this cyphered air
into your little lungs
and you breathed for the very first time

without any prodding you opened up your
mouth and screamed out into the room
a small but unmistakable  sound
then paused
stretching arms and legs out towards the sky
and seemed to listen for some familiar voice to respond

they scrubbed your head and face
wiping away the residue of all your past
we waited for the link to stop pulsing
and I thought how you traveled from life to life
how we must all travel from life to life
and I took scissors in hand to cut the cord

then
you became your own little soul
with arms and ears
eyes and toes to ponder
for fingers to be counted and features to be examined in depth

in that moment
we were all reborn


Scheme X XXXXXXXXX XXXXXX XXXAAX XXXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1001110 1101110 1011010 0101 0101 110101 0101 01000010111 011101 011101011 01101011011 10110101 01101001 11 1010110101 01110110101101 111101 10010101111 1101011110 01111101111 1111101111 01110011101 1 10111101 1101 101110 11011100101101001 0110 10111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 926
Words 181
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 6, 6, 5, 2
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

Written after the birth of the author's grandson.

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Written on May 25, 2016

Submitted by allthatdrama418 on November 17, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Carolyn L. Robinson

Carolyn L. Robinson is an eight times published author. Her poetry defines what heartfelt, honest poetry involves. She enjoys being creative and traveling. She is a resident of Baltimore, MD. more…

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