Analysis of Success

Simran Singh 2002 (Kolkata, west bengal)



This that these those
Is what we all chose
Build a home, reach a goal
Without falling in the hole

Transforming gold needs fire
          Burning, shaping and one's desire
          Even coal need burnt to death
    Just to acquire Ash and choke to breath

If getting success was easy
Then even beggars would've been busy
Opportunity do need to be grabbed
But failures need to be abd

Leading a path demands walk
         Crossing millions of log that block     Painting a beautiful picture need a canvas,
        Brush, Colors, and hardwork surplus
                                


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF XGG
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11111 101101 0110001 0101110 101001010 1011111 1101010111 11001110 1101010110 010011111 1101111 1001011 10101111100100101010 1100110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 606
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

This poem is all about today's generation who want everything but without failure. We want everything but within our comfort zone. We tend to forget that success is success only because it acquires one's hardwork and dedication towards it.

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Written on June 06, 2021

Submitted by singh.simran.1302 on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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