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Simran Singh 2002 (Kolkata, west bengal)

This that these those
Is what we all chose
Build a home, reach a goal
Without falling in the hole

Transforming gold needs fire
Burning, shaping and one's desire
Even coal need burnt to death
Just to acquire Ash and choke to breath

If getting success was easy
Then even beggars would've been busy
Opportunity do need to be grabbed
But failures need to be abd

Leading a path demands walk
Crossing millions of log that block Painting a beautiful picture need a canvas,
Brush, Colors, and hardwork surplus

About this poem

This poem is all about today's generation who want everything but without failure. We want everything but within our comfort zone. We tend to forget that success is success only because it acquires one's hardwork and dedication towards it.

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Written on June 06, 2021

Submitted by singh.simran.1302 on October 27, 2022

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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 606
Words 97
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3

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