Analysis of Not Fully There
I don’t think you are fully there
Between the hours, the coffees and mischievousness
I don’t think you are fully there
Between what they teach you, what you want and what you really are
I don’t think you are fully there
Between the darkness, the obscurity, the obscenity of the …
Night?
I don’t think you are fully there
Between the dreams, the unicorns invented, the princess that will never exist
I don’t think you are fully there
I can open the door
I can hear you whispering
I can see you, your silhouette
Tired, humble, praying
Asking for the why
Imagining the what if
I see her here, in her room fully tucked in, happy,
I don’t see the other one,
The other never had the chance,
The other wasn’t even born,
I just see this one, the hope, the alive one
I understand now
I don’t see you fully there because you left
With the other
The other one that was your first, the unborn
I see the pain, I see the guilt
The questioning
I now understand,
Is not that I don’t see you
Is that you simply choose
not to be fully there…
Scheme | AbAcAdeAfAghihjklmbnmopqnrhstba |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111101 0101001001 11111101 011111111011101 11111101 01010001000010010 1 11111101 010101010010111001 11111101 111001 1111100 1111101 101010 10101 0100011 1101001101010 1110101 01010101 0101101 11111010011 1011 11111010111 1010 01011111011 11011101 0100 1101 1111111 111101 111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,050 |
Words | 206 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 31 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 795 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 197 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem to help me find answers after I had a late miscarriage.
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Written on October 25, 2022
Submitted by ana27us on October 25, 2022
Modified on March 23, 2023
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