Analysis of Fault in my own thoughts

Himanshi Maniktahla 2006 (Haryana, india)



Am I the only one who is at fault?
Or is it them making me think so?

Am i the only one who has restrictions?
Or everybody else has the same?

Am I the only one who wishes instead of aspiring, or everybody does the same?

In the era, where in everybody wants to fly,
Am I the only one who still wants to create my own universe?

In the generation, where everybody wants to have a family, am i the only one who avoids such chores?

If they don't think the same , am i the only one at fault ?

In the era, where everybody wants a support system,
Am i the only one who wants to become independent?

After 75 years of my nation's independence, Am i the only one still waiting for mine?

Am i the only one who writes to make my fantasies turn real, or every poet does the same?

Am i the only one who wants to follow fireflies instead of butterflies or every teenager do the same?

Am i the only one who thinks myself as a weirdo or everybody thinks the same, at some point of their live?

At this point of my life, am i the only who is in search of a better myself while losing the best of myself?

Is it really fault in my own thought? Or everybody thinks the same?


Scheme AX XB B XX X A XX X B B X X B
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011111 111110111 11010111010 11001101 1101011100110101100101 001010100111 1101011111011110 000101100111010011010110111 11110111010111 00101100100110 11010111101010 101111001011010111011 1101011111110011110010101 110101111101001110110010101 11010111110101100101111111 111111110101101101011100111 1110101111100101
Characters 1,164
Words 260
Sentences 16
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This poem that I have written is a little inspiration from my life that I have been living in a delimma and how I think that I am different from resr of thr teenagers

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Written on October 01, 2022

Submitted by himanshi23.maniktahla on October 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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