Analysis of Carnal Desirability
You're a dangerous spell,
Making me take risks for you
And I'm feeling foregin.
Your eyes are the entrance
Of the nirvana,
Skeleton in the cupboard;
Carnal desirability,
Blazing the background
You're my only pivot.
And there,
Your hands, slender fingers,
Skin getting impatient
Tell me when I'm bewitched.
I seriously don't know
It's only me and you
My body needs it all
And I don't know how to stop it.
You're a sweet candy
Making me taste you more
And I'm becoming ravenous.
Your lips are the allure
Of all shows.
Centerpiece in the concentration
Carnal desirability
Stimulating in the hormones
You're my only pivot.
And there,
Your smile, grined shaped
Skin getting impatient
Tell me when I'm bewitched
I seriously don't know
It's only me and you.
My body needs it all
And I don't want to stop it.
You're a perfect creation
Making me scream your name all day
And I'm turning insane.
Your voice is the sound
Of thousand angels
Paralyzed in the movements
Carnal desirability
Bursting the sensation
You're my only pivot
And there,
Your hair, brownish-black
Skin getting impatient
Tell me when I'm bewitched
I seriously don't know
It's only me and you.
My body needs it all
And I don't want to stop it.
Scheme | xab xbxCdEFxGHBAIj cxx xxbCxEFxGHBAIJ bxb dxxCbEFxGHBAIJ |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101001 1011111 01101 111010 10010 1000010 1000100 1001 111010 01 111010 110010 111101 1100011 110101 110111 01111111 10110 101111 01010100 111001 111 1000010 1000100 100001 111010 01 1111 110010 111101 1100011 110101 110111 0111111 1001010 10111111 011001 11101 11010 100010 1000100 100010 111010 01 11101 110010 111101 1100011 110101 110111 0111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,206 |
Words | 235 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 14, 3, 14, 3, 14 |
Lines Amount | 51 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 158 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
About this poem
The poem is about madly in love with someone and having carnal thoughts about your beloved. This love encourages you to take risk just to be closer with them for ever
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Written on December 30, 2020
Submitted by iampatricawilson on October 20, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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