Carnal Desirability



You're a dangerous spell,
Making me take risks for you
And I'm feeling foregin.

Your eyes are the entrance
Of the nirvana,
Skeleton in the cupboard;
Carnal desirability,
Blazing the background
You're my only pivot.
And there,
Your hands, slender fingers,
Skin getting impatient
Tell me when I'm bewitched.
I seriously don't know
It's only me and you
My body needs it all
And I don't know how to stop it.

You're a sweet candy
Making me taste you more
And I'm becoming ravenous.

Your lips are the allure
Of all shows.
Centerpiece in the concentration
Carnal desirability
Stimulating in the hormones
You're my only pivot.
And there,
Your smile, grined shaped
Skin getting impatient
Tell me when I'm bewitched
I seriously don't know
It's only me and you.
My body needs it all
And I don't want to stop it.

You're a perfect creation
Making me scream your name all day
And I'm turning insane.

Your voice is the sound
Of thousand angels
Paralyzed in the movements
Carnal desirability
Bursting the sensation
You're my only pivot
And there,
Your hair, brownish-black
Skin getting impatient
Tell me when I'm bewitched
I seriously don't know
It's only me and you.
My body needs it all
And I don't want to stop it.

About this poem

The poem is about madly in love with someone and having carnal thoughts about your beloved. This love encourages you to take risk just to be closer with them for ever

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Written on December 30, 2020

Submitted by iampatricawilson on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xab xbxCdEFxGHBAIj cxx xxbCxEFxGHBAIJ bxb dxxCbEFxGHBAIJ
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,206
Words 235
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 14, 3, 14, 3, 14

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