Analysis of A Message



Poet :
Khan Hasnain Aqib
 Pusad, Maharashtra

Who knew
That a message
Landed already in my inbox
Awaiting for weeks
 For my reply
Your message....
That landed in my inbox
Will prove to be
The launching pad
Of a beautiful bond!
That was then
That
I didn't even know you
So I ignored your message
But this one message
Cultivated the soft and gentle emotions
Of love
No doubt, it was you
Who initiated the communication
But who knew
That someday
An introvert like me
Would mingle with you
To this extent!
 Of course, my sophistication prevailed
Over your savageness
My tolerance outpaced your arrogance
And
My honesty tossed  your hauteur
Then we
Despite being wounded by a dividing line
Drawn on a stretch of land
Met each other so passionately
As if we were parted since centuries
As if we were waiting for each other
Since many reincarnations
As if we were made for each other
Like a bond between dream and its interpretation
Like a bond between love and a shackle
Like a bond between pen and a writing
But listen, my dear!
I make you swear
Swear by the lamps of hope
Burning in my eyes
Swear by the fire flies That flicker in my heart!
Don't look back into your past
Now only we two exist
You and Me!
There can't be any grief
If we are together
The compensation of our lifelong thirst
Is nothing else except love
So resolve with commitment
That you will never part away from me
If this ever happens in life
The love will get into agony and distress
If this ever happens
Then
This delicate string of my breaths
Will cut off and break right away!!!!


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Poetic Form
Metre 10 111 101 11 1010 10010011 01011 1101 110 110011 1111 0101 101001 111 1 1101011 1101110 11110 10001010010 11 11111 1010000010 111 11 11011 11011 1101 111001001 1011 110011100 0 1100111 11 011010100101 110111 111011000 1110101100 1110101110 1101 111011110 101011010010 1010110010 1010110010 11011 1111 110111 10011 110101110011 1110111 1101101 101 111101 111010 0010110111 1101011 1011010 1111010111 11101001 011101100001 111010 1 11001111 11101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,657
Words 345
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 60
Lines Amount 63
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 618
Words per stanza (avg) 144

About this poem

A Message is a poem depicting love that occurs through social media platforms. It is a beautiful piece of writing expressing intricate feelings and emotions regarding distant love.

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Submitted by hasnainaaqib1 on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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