Analysis of A Hug

Mitee Patel 2006 (Ahmedabad)



A single compliment can make you overthink a lot of shit inside
your head
The moment after i heard it nearly made me
Go mad

Yeah my heart melted along with
my mind
Couldn't think of anything but him,
Spent the whole night wondering if it
Was a sign

He is not my type
Like at all
But i guess opposites do attract in real life
After all i am not the one who decides for whom
I should fall

When it accidentally slipped from my mouth i legit wanna hug you right now coz nobody has said that to me before
A second of pause went by and there came his warm, 5 second hug
Which i have become
A simp for

I gotta say,  his hoodie was the soft mattress
To his hard wooden bed like body,
Just wanna know if he counts me in everybody or somebody.

- Mitsss
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Scheme XXAX XXXXX XBXXB CXXC DAA DX
Poetic Form
Metre 0101001111011101 11 010101111011 11 11110011 11 10111011 101110011 101 11111 111 111100101011 101111011111 111 1101001111110101111111111101 010111101111101 11101 011 11011110110 111101110 110111110100110 1 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 852
Words 168
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 5, 4, 3, 2
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This poem is about what a compliment and a hug mean to a person.

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Written on October 23, 2022

Submitted by miteesss2006 on October 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mitee Patel

16 year old living in Ahmedabad. Wannabe writer. Novels by Colleen Hoover>>>> Personality like Phoebe Buffay. Chai over coffee Simp for Harry Styles. Pizza and waffles are love. more…

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