A Hug

Mitee Patel 2006 (Ahmedabad)



A single compliment can make you overthink a lot of shit inside
your head
The moment after i heard it nearly made me
Go mad

Yeah my heart melted along with
my mind
Couldn't think of anything but him,
Spent the whole night wondering if it
Was a sign

He is not my type
Like at all
But i guess opposites do attract in real life
After all i am not the one who decides for whom
I should fall

When it accidentally slipped from my mouth i legit wanna hug you right now coz nobody has said that to me before
A second of pause went by and there came his warm, 5 second hug
Which i have become
A simp for

I gotta say,  his hoodie was the soft mattress
To his hard wooden bed like body,
Just wanna know if he counts me in everybody or somebody.
                         
                         - Mitsss
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About this poem

This poem is about what a compliment and a hug mean to a person.

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Written on October 23, 2022

Submitted by miteesss2006 on October 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXAX XXXXX XBXXB CXXC DAA DX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 852
Words 168
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 5, 4, 3, 2

Mitee Patel

16 year old living in Ahmedabad. Wannabe writer. Novels by Colleen Hoover>>>> Personality like Phoebe Buffay. Chai over coffee Simp for Harry Styles. Pizza and waffles are love. more…

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