Analysis of Too Ethnically Diversified



With credit given,
To those certified as being qualified.
And deemed committed to permit,
An opportunity to deepen their debts.
To then be approved,
For more loans to get to have accepted.
Without it to question delayed payments.
Months behind yet to receive.
Although leaving people like this,
Often upset to protest against...
The state of a floundering economy.
To wonder why the cost and price of living,
Has begun to rise out of reach.
Done to hear the people blame to claim,
The reason and cause...
Of their their quality of life,
Is a democracy that has become weakened.
By too much ethnic diversity.
And not the ones in positions to sit,
Incompetent.
As if children playing roles to be leaders.
But unfamiliar,
With the meaning to use common sense.

'We won our seats.
Elected to positions of leadership.'

'Okay.
That sounds great.
Now...
Who are you going to place the blame on,
For being incapable to do it?'

'You know LEAD.
As leaders should.
Making the effort to endeavor.
Other than criticize, deceive and tell lies.'

'What are you saying?'

'It was easy for you to credit your debts.
Without it to question,
Your capability to prove you could repay,
What you received to get.
And here you are now sitting,
With a giving of an opportunity...
To verify before your supporters,
You will prove without question...
Your abilities and capabilities,
Are more than worth...
Their money spent to endorse,
Your contagious and effective campaign!
Aren't you excited about that?'

'Uh...
Yes.
Yes, of course.'


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Poetic Form
Metre 11010 111011010 01010101 1010011011 11101 1111111010 0111100110 1011101 1101011 10011101 01101000100 11010101110 10111111 111010111 01001 11110011 100100110110 111100100 0101001011 0100 11101011110 1010 101011101 11101 0101010110 1 111 1 1111011011 1100100111 111 1101 100101010 1011001011 11110 11101111011 011110 10100111101 110111 0111110 1010110100 110011010 1110110 1010000100 1111 1101101 1010001001 101010011 1 1 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,526
Words 318
Sentences 37
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 23, 2, 5, 4, 1, 13, 3
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 167
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Written on November 02, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on November 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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