Analysis of Stardreams (The next chapter)



The dreams of evernight, cast in endless glory.
Pored from a mold, never quite true.
Yet all was wrought, by one, for you.
A multitude of brilliant stars.
What might they hold?
Grant me, but one wish.

There, I wish to go.
And talk of peace and truth, as best I could.
I would invite but two.
Then bring my friends along.
Oh, but to find, those, there among.
I'd offer my hand in friendly gesture.
I would ask the universe, for safe passage.
The wonders to be seen.
The hardships to endure.
Very much like home.

A silent echo, in the mind's ear.
Distant memories, carried from the past.
Songs of yesteryear, long forgotten friends.
Passing thoughts, a half remembered dream.
Laughing silently, then out loud.
All to one's self. Once more, reality.
Your light years away and a lifetime to go.
Carried by the wind of a star gone nova.

You slip through evernight.
Lost, in a starman's dream.
Home is here, among nebula's of wonder and color.
And blackholes of fantastic size.

Yet, if upon this Earth,
my journey still carries me.
Then for those who may be out there.
Peace and good fortune.


Scheme ABBXCX DXBXXEXXXX XXXFXADX CFEX XAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0111101010 11011011 11111111 0101101 1111 11111 11111 0111011111 110111 111101 11111101 1101101010 1110101110 010111 010101 10111 010100011 1010010101 111010101 101010101 10100111 11111110 1110100111 10101101110 1111 10011 111011110010 0110101 110111 1101101 11111111 10110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,091
Words 232
Sentences 32
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 10, 8, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 166
Words per stanza (avg) 39

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original. Just another work in progress. Unfortunately, every thing in space is black and white.

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Submitted by on October 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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