Analysis of When your smile fade away



When your smile fade away,
Will you still be the same,
Will you try and stay
Holding me all the way?
When the sun will leave,
Will you follow it’s lead,
Will you leave me down,
Will my trust get drowned,
Will I be alone,destroyed,
Or in the sky,being loved?
With butterflies all around floating
With our hands tightly holding,
Will I be alive,complete,
Or just a simple,cold heartbeat?


Scheme ABAACDEFDGHHDI
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 111101 11101 101101 10111 111011 11111 11111 1111 10011 11010110 11011010 1111 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 387
Words 84
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 300
Words per stanza (avg) 69

About this poem

I wrote this poem,thinking about how people who love eachother would react when not everything is perfect in their relationship anymore.

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Written on September 21, 2022

Submitted by beatricecreta on September 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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