Analysis of Lust

Gideon Akwose 1998 (Benue state)



Before 1900
 Our culture a strong backbone
Our bow and spear a defence
Shield by our shield
Justice is justice
To err is human and the punishment stings you

In 1900
Across the Atlantic, they sail
With a culture we couldnot understand
Though their lifestyle a luxury,their culture stinks
Indirect rule an exchange for exploitation
Our culture of justice is adulterated with pardon

1920 elective era
Divide and rule imposed
Representative to represent the thieves
North of the northern,
South of the white man
We suffer  these till date

1960,the green flag stands tall
Unity in diversity we claim
From dependent to ill-dependence
Political frivolities and greed displayed

1963, Republican nation
Free from white but caged by blacks

1966 era of peace by coercion
Mutiny and arson displayed
Like the Israelites we cry
A cry for freedom

1999, joy and celebration
Military to demote- cracy
Game of luxury,greed and penury
Visions of the 60's ends in the belly of men in their 80's.


Scheme XXAXXX XXXXBB XXXXXX XXXC BX BCXX BAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01 1010011 10101001 11101 10110 111100010011 0 01001011 10101101 11101101 0011101110 101011010100110 01010 010101 010010101 11010 11011 110111 01111 1000010011 101011010 010010101 010010 1111111 10111010 10001001 101011 01110 10010 1001011 1110100 101011001011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 982
Words 174
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 4, 2, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

It is a historical poem ,the different stages and it's effect on the nation, The lust and greed of it's leaders After all the struggles to gain independent in 1960, men in their 80's embezzled it all. That means all this labour were all in vain.

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Written on September 15, 2022

Submitted by gideonmogul on September 15, 2022

Modified on March 08, 2023

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Gideon Akwose

Gideon Akwose writes from Uyo in Akwa Ibom state. He is a creative writer, student, and who loves exploring the world of creativity through writing and reading books. When he is not writing or reading, he is either watching movies or listening to music .. Gideon Akwose is currently studying for a B.A (Hons.) English and Literature at University of uyo. more…

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