Analysis of Atonement
Atonement of those words that left from your mouth,
Which broke my heart beyond any bound.
Those gut-wrenching actions, that I have seen from your eyes,
Are more painful than your lies.
That love you claimed was never mine,
For you, I have always been a rotten wine,
Sour and sharp, not so divine.
The moment that we had feels like a sham now,
Your presence now is my broken vow.
The gate has been closed there is no way to trespass,
The love that I had is devastated, perhaps.
| Scheme | ABCCDDDEEFG |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 01011111111 111101101 1110101111111 1110111 11111101 1111110101 10011101 01011111011 110111101 01111111111 01111110001 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 477 |
| Words | 100 |
| Sentences | 5 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 11 |
| Lines Amount | 11 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
| Words per line (avg) | 8 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 372 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 90 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem on a failed relationship in which all they can do regret and pain.
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Written on September 28, 2022
Submitted by shraddhatripathi728 on September 28, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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