Atonement



Atonement of those words that left from your mouth,
Which broke my heart beyond any bound.
Those gut-wrenching actions, that I have seen from your eyes,
Are more painful than your lies.
That love you claimed was never mine,
For you, I have always been a rotten wine,
Sour and sharp, not so divine.
The moment that we had feels like a sham now,
Your presence now is my broken vow.
The gate has been closed there is no way to trespass,
The love that I had is devastated, perhaps.

About this poem

I wrote this poem on a failed relationship in which all they can do regret and pain.

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Written on September 28, 2022

Submitted by shraddhatripathi728 on September 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDDDEEFG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 477
Words 100
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11

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