Analysis of While The Torns And Brier's Last

Sam madeyin 1991 (Ogun States)



Torns and Brier's laid on cheapishly but neckchokeing, unsafe and easy on natured economy
Still can't run my home front anymore neither my family
enough to be catered for
With mean modicums derived every end months
Bored and tored by white collared job
 but high was noble monuments I dreamt of living
but market rice amounts be overweighed
Peppers, onions, tomatoes is scarce with price
O, fugitive flagbearer green where are we heading to
 our compass loss in process and our directions split under the cloven tongues of maladministration
When and why we masqueraded from gold sower to buyers overnight
Maiduguri to my state a war betones plights
Fear of unsafe around unless could take a flight
Transportation indeed porous seen
plantations greener but no harvesters glean
Average universe's daily ammassing but poorly be fed
bloody injected flesh oft dead because there's no midwives again that could dare and care
 alas this torns is red
Therefore of this signs I was bread
Would be reaped by God's someday.


Scheme AABCDEFGFHFCFHHFIFFF
Poetic Form
Metre 10111111010101100100 11111101101100 0111101 1110110011 10111101 1111010011110 11010111 10100101111 110011111101 101010101001011001111 101111110110101 11110111 110101011101 01001101 1010111001 100110111011 10010111011110111101 011111 1111111 111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,013
Words 169
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 832
Words per stanza (avg) 168

About this poem

This is my love and cry for poor Nigerian who could barely survived the storm of present economy turnedowns.

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Written on October 06, 2022

Submitted by LiteralErudite on October 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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