Commodore of Clay



Higher than anyone of us
A humble creature arrayed than eternal angel
His maker divineed head
Looks a way like him, behold and laud his glory
Although he suffers as we suffered and bleed like us do bled
Has five senses like we do not,
So endowed with so many a lot.
Call to name a nomenclatures and the unknown
By his creator God wisdom.
Though made him a Eden kingdom
Never shall he suffer loss
Gave He him a wife and her name was Eve
Naked they were. Shamed covered with sewn fig leave.
He gone against his creator Almighty bsguiled of ordinary animal.

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theme of creation is hidden-opened here. Poet Emphasized and took his pens on and on Adam at the first creature before the crafted-in sin through a snakes (satan) beguilement.

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Written on August 10, 2021

Submitted by Madeyin'sPetry on August 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDCEEFGGHIIB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 543
Words 105
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

Sam madeyin

 · 1991 · Ogun State

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