Analysis of DEATH, WHY FORSAKE ME?



I think about you all the time
I yearn for you above all
I pray for your visit daily
Why forsake me?

My labored breath inflates
For the sole purpose to deflate
My erratic loud heartbeat
Are my demons clamoring release

My weary steps are endless
Leading to nowhere anywhere
My arms labor day in day out
But gets nothing to the mouth

My mind thinks all the time
From toddler to my thirty
But has found no solutions
Except one final savior

My Lord, why forsake me?


Scheme AXBB XXXX XXXX ABXX B
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 1111011 11111010 1011 110101 10110101 101011 111010001 1101110 101110 11101011 1110101 111101 1101110 1111010 0111010 111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 465
Words 93
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

A silent plea for help.

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Submitted by GIDRAF on October 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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