Analysis of My last try
MY LAST TRY
Clinging for hope I was
Tough times were
storms shall pass
I tried though I fear
Envy of love I had
Willing to try so hard
My last try got me this soul
Followed the sounds of birds
It's a sign I looked for
in the battle of failure I was
I followed the signal
I slipped from a cliff
I felled in love
And gave my heart to a careless person
With fingers made of razzers
My last try led me to grief and sadness
I followed the wrong path
With my last hope, breath and energy
who will help with this egeny
Its my own baby to nurse
I lost trust and love
I crawled out of anxiety to love
My heart was torned apart
it was like I never existed
"Dont break my heart I insisted
That was just a song
my last try got me scars
I will never love again I vowed
| Scheme | X AXXXXX XXXAXXBCA XXXCXB BXDDXXX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 111 101111 110 111 11111 101111 101111 1111111 100111 101111 001011011 110010 11101 1101 0111101010 110111 1111111010 110011 111110100 111111 1111011 11101 1111010011 111101 111110010 11111010 11101 111111 111010111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 785 |
| Words | 176 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 6, 9, 6, 7 |
| Lines Amount | 29 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 119 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 32 |
About this poem
The poem is about a person who's telling what happened,when tried to do something for the last time,and found out that a heart ended up broken
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Written on March 15, 2022
Submitted by sambomlungisicbo on August 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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