My last try



MY LAST TRY

Clinging for hope I was
Tough times were
storms shall pass
 I tried though I fear
Envy of love I had
Willing to try so hard

My last try got me this soul
Followed the sounds of birds
It's a sign I looked for
in the battle of failure I was
I followed the signal
I slipped from a cliff
I felled in love
And gave my heart to  a careless person
With fingers made of razzers

My last try led me to grief and sadness
I followed the wrong path
With my last hope, breath and energy
who will help with this egeny
Its my own baby to nurse
I lost trust and love

I crawled out of anxiety to love
My heart was torned apart
it was like I never existed
"Dont break my heart I insisted
That was just a song
my last try got me scars
I will never love again I vowed

kooperdapoet

About this poem

The poem is about a person who's telling what happened,when tried to do something for the last time,and found out that a heart ended up broken

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Written on March 15, 2022

Submitted by sambomlungisicbo on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme X AXXXXX XXXAXXBCA XXXCXB BXDDXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 785
Words 176
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 9, 6, 7

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