Analysis of Encounters



Eyes closed, rubbing in disbelief,                                                                                   
causing a parade of psychedelic colors and shapes that
obscure the wonderland                                                                        
I have encroached upon.

Eyes wide open, images start to manifest.                                                               
A wasp, donning in a vibrant saffron hue,
performs with balletic grace,                                                                                                   
under the spell of limerence, bestowing kisses from head to toe.
A welcoming to this magnificent kingdom.
I was left stupefied; The wasp did not bite.

An idyllic spider saunters up my arm, its velvety legs tantalize each nerve.
Envisioning a leaf as the origin, I do not swat.                                                                                             
Lowering my eyes down, the discovery unveils.                                                                                           Noticing the hairs soar, enhanced from oversized goosebumps,
afflicted by a wanderer, resting on my arm.                            

Dressed is the spider, in a deep shade of amber and dappled in claret,
that instinctively notices my apprehension.                                      
To ease the fear, he graciously chants in beautiful tones, by strumming all eight legs.
I become delightfully serene.   

Suddenly, my olfactory receptors led me, as if hook and bait,                                                        
to an alluring scent.                 
Harmonizing in a sweet smell, emerges a seductive snake.
Shimmering in a sea green shade, he
serenades in a spellbinding staccato.  
Standing in shock, I shiver and shout.   
The sleek, skillful and stunning serpent
points south with its forked tongue sticking out.
I remain steadfast in the serpent's suggestion and scurry.

Bang! Startled, I stub my toe;
An atomic display of lights radiates from a prismatic skyline.

Massaging my eyes, I awaken from an exquisite dream.


Scheme XAXX XXBCXX XXBX AXXX XXXDCEXED CX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110001 10001101010011 01010 110101 11101001110 01100010101 01111 100111010101111 010011010010 111101111 1010101111110011011 010001101001111 1001110010001100011011101 0101010010111 1101000111100101 101001001010 11011100101001110111 101010001 100101000101111101 110101 100001101000101 100001111 1001001 100111001 011001010 111111101 10110010010010 1101111 1010011110100101 010111010111001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,251
Words 274
Sentences 21
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 4, 9, 2, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 167
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Written on August 26, 2022

Submitted by springboxishappy on August 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:22 min read
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Dana Rogers

I worked as a dental hygienist for 25 years full time and raised my son as a single parent for 12. I had to give up my creative side. My son is now in his last year in college and already has a job waiting for him. I now am able to relax a enjoy the arts. more…

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