Analysis of TIMELESS LOVE PIECES



Dance with me in this looms,
Where my heart, beat to your image,
Like you are here to smile a while,
Chatting me so dearly and fondle,
Once as last time we wave to our shadows, behind.

Lurk around me
In your worries of missing me
Then I will clap to the wind you sent forth
And the sound of your whisper will knock
On my heart with arms of gold
To wellcome you aboard my life
So eager to take your hands
In curfs of my twisted fingers

I will wait to experience
Your claws in my flesh
Like a swooping kite
that suddenly stole my hen
But I long to have you in my corner
Till the last goodbye song begins
Into the world so far
Just a homing pilgrims.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111011 11111110 11111101 101110010 111111110101 1011 01101101 1111101111 001111011 1111111 1110111 1101111 01111010 11110100 11011 10101 1100111 1111110110 1011101 010111 101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 651
Words 141
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 8, 8
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 44

About this poem

Love dies not when we find the best partner that accomodate ills in relationship.Love will continue to be enjoyed to the last breath we inhale to our final feet beneath the earth. A poem of always.

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Written on March 09, 2022

Submitted by Bossmanas on September 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dumka Vincent

I am a lover of poem.I love to read and write and my first letter was addressed to my headmaster,requested that he assist my mother to pay off my school exammination fee.At the age 6 years,I had already started writing my short story books.But though,some life experiences had also contributed towards my continuous effort to face the challenges of life.I had written series of prose,articles andwith my little experienced poetry is part of my whole life,when I sing in poetry,speak in poetry,settle scores in poetry,discuss in poetry etc.My dedication towards poetry out of my utmost concern is to be Known for my credibility,participatory efforts in my personal achievement and divine from God.Poetry is part of my life.May poetry.com live on (Dumka Richard Vincent.L more…

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