Analysis of LisTen Close



Be still. Be quiet.
Listen closely my friend.
Sober up. Stay strong.
This isn’t THE END!

Pay attention now,
Buckle up, here we go!
Imma take you on a journey,
It’s one helluva show.

The GOOD times are filled,
With regret and despair.
Needy and greedy,
Controlling. Unfair

Feenin’ for this,
Feenin’ for that,
Feenin’ for LIFE,
Or a heart attack!

Wasted hours turn to wasted days,
Wasted morals and wasted ways.

Wasted time I’ll never get back,
Wasted money I couldn’t keep track.

So many times,
I wanted out.
So many times,
I wanted to shout.

So many sleepless nights I spent,
So many dark dank places I went.

I wanna be sober!
I wanna be clean!
I want what I say,
And I say what I mean!

I’ll give it my all,
I’ll give and I’ll give.
But addiction is stronger,
Than my will to live.

It’s late night now,
I’m tired. I’m done.
I wanna go home,
Here comes the sun.

But you can’t stop now.
The aches. The pain.
The fear of waking up,
Will drive you insane.

Be quiet. Be still.
Be patient. Persevere.
Be calm. Stay strong.
I hear a whisper in my ear.

The whisper grows stronger,
With each passing day.
“I have plans for you”,
I hear him say.

“Things may not always,
Be as they seem,
But trust and believe,
And have faith in your dreams!

Lean on me dear,
Let me carry you my friend.
For this is just the beginning,
Not simply THE END!”


Scheme xaba cded xfef xxxg hh gg IjIj kk lmnm xxlx coxo cpxp xqbx lnxn hxxx qaxa
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 101011 10111 1101 10101 101111 1111010 11101 01111 101001 10010 01001 111 111 111 10101 101011101 10100101 10111011 10101111 1101 1101 1101 11011 11010111 110111011 110110 11011 11111 011111 11111 11011 1010110 11111 1111 11011 11011 1101 11111 0101 011101 11101 11011 110001 1111 11010011 010110 11101 11111 1111 1111 1111 11001 011011 1111 1110111 11110010 11001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,411
Words 331
Sentences 41
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 2, 4, 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

This isn’t the end, it’s just the beginning.

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Written on August 13, 2022

Submitted by Manda792022 on August 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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