Analysis of Hidden Emotions



Theme: Hidden Emotions

Whenever my heart pumps extra
ordinary,
Whenever my throat made an odd sound,
Whenever my brain's vein tickles so quickly,
Whenever I am  trembling,
I feel it's sign of my hidden emotions.
I taught myself,
to go towards the solo spot,
Remote from known coast,
Far from my home ,
Faraway from nearer,
Faraway from my dearer,
I groan loudly
Tears roll down from my hairy cheeks,
Little down touch my neck,
Little down touch my cleavage,
Little down touch my paunch,
I cry until  my hiccups,
dies.
Long silence,
Slowly slowly
I d come back,
Towards my hut,
With fresh face,
Washed eyes,
I never cry in front of folks
I always keep smile ,
I am the maestro of hidden emotions..


Scheme A XBXBXAXXXXCCBXXXXXDXBXXXDXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 110010 01011110 100 010111111 01011110110 01011100 11111110010 111 1101011 01111 1111 101110 1011110 1110 11111101 101111 1011110 101111 1101110 1 110 1010 1111 0111 111 11 11010111 1111 11010110010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 702
Words 151
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 28
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 271
Words per stanza (avg) 64

About this poem

It's my own feelings whenever I feel stressful and become nervous, I try to weave such kind of verses

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Written on December 16, 1977

Submitted by allahobhayodal on July 31, 2022

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Allahobhayo Dal

Short Biography Internationally renowned Pakistani eminent poet Allahobhayo Dal was born on December 16, 1977 at Khipro, District Sanghar in Sindh Province of Pakistan. He was started writing fairytales in Sindhi language sinve his boyhood. As it published in the different renowned newspapers, literary magazines, and little magazines in 90s decade. Now he is familiar as a vibrant poet and writer. He obtained his Masters in Sociology from University of Sindh. He had appointed in a renowned organization in 2001. Later on, he got direct appointment as an officer associated with administrative works. Now he is doing a job in Karachi. He has been awarded lettet of appreciation and certificate of recognition from his workplace for tremendous service delivery excellence. More than 100 of his poems have been published in the global literary magazines, newspapers as well as it is included in huge number of anthologies over the world. Shakespeare and Shakil Kalam are his favourite poets. His book is in under process which will be published as soon. more…

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