Analysis of Eyes Deep



The emotions
Unseen
From a distance
Are merely a passing fancy
Eyes deeply wishing
While counting stars
And dancing with the moon
That this could not possibly be true
The eyes deep
Showing his true colors
She never saw beyond his face
The colors
That not even the worst of nature
Would take.
Eyes deep
She looks inside
To her heart
Then decides
To collect herself
Emotions true
And walks away from his crocodile tears
And eyes deep
Knows her decision was right
Despite her love being purely true.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKJLMINOPQHRISH
Poetic Form
Metre 0010 01 1010 11001010 11010 1101 010101 111110011 011 101110 11010111 010 111001110 11 11 1101 101 11 10101 0101 010111101 011 1001011 010110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 497
Words 91
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 406
Words per stanza (avg) 89

About this poem

A journey into the loss of a relationship and the process of healing

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Written on July 29, 2022

Submitted by flisburns on July 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Marie Flis

Aspiring writer who believes in words for expressing what we otherwise might not be able to. Enjoy creating poetry from photo prompts and word prompt challenges. more…

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