Eyes Deep



The emotions
Unseen
From a distance
Are merely a passing fancy
Eyes deeply wishing
While counting stars
And dancing with the moon
That this could not possibly be true
The eyes deep
Showing his true colors
She never saw beyond his face
The colors
That not even the worst of nature
Would take.
Eyes deep
She looks inside
To her heart
Then decides
To collect herself
Emotions true
And walks away from his crocodile tears
And eyes deep
Knows her decision was right
Despite her love being purely true.

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A journey into the loss of a relationship and the process of healing

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Written on July 29, 2022

Submitted by flisburns on July 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 497
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Stanza Lengths 24

Marie Flis

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