Analysis of Earth's Breathe



Out across the sea
Eels twisting through turning tides
Jellyfish decorating empty seas
Sea slugs slithering up reefs of the olden
Orcas singing in the dead of night

Down
Deep within this world, we know
On the crest of the wave
In turning tides
Drifting through vast seas
Twirling and dancing
Gifting corals festive hues
Giving breathe to the wind
The stardust that litters midnight oceans
Creating a super-sized cosmic ray


Scheme XABXX XXXABXXXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10101 1101101 10100101 11100111010 101000111 1 1011111 101101 0101 10111 10010 1010101 101101 01110110 0100101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 424
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 10
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 175
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted by on July 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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