Analysis of The ancient birthing place.



Their is a lineage long hidden from society.
Where birth is restricted to one day in the archaic family calendar year and only 300 archaic children are permitted to be born on that day through ceserean section using   only volcanic materials. Children in this lineage are born only within the bloodline of Adam and Eve themselves.
The birth has to happen around a sacred statue of God on the second of October during a sacred mass love ritual or else the birthed children will be deemed unworthy and have to be stolen from the mothers arms and banished into an underground world far from the archaic family itself, never to be found again, as a respectful acknowledgement of their lack of worthiness that year.
During the ceremony the Worship Blesser presents the people to the alter and a successful birth of all 300 children only is successful so this is deeply prayed for.
If it is a worthy ceremony the childrens heads are all shaved clean and a hole is bore into the top of the child's head with a molten rock needle from earths oldest volcano and a golden bead is sewn there and is never removed.
The two holes, one in the child's head, the other in the mothers stomach, represent the removal and restoral of the umbilical cord and the connection between the maker and humanity.
People adorn themselves in golden beads, rings, ringed earrings, scalfs and with golden ropes around their waist.
Then they pray for a successful and healthy year.
The ritual ends with the mother and child bowing to each other and touching the top of their heads together, then celebrations of light, love and prosperity continue throughout a three month period.
On very rare occasions a grown child is allowed back to the group, when the number of mothers or fathers able to create birth naturally falls short.
In such a case a return ceremony is required whereby cleansing, and prayer for forgiving, healing and unconditional love is restored through use of golden spoons, frankincense and mhyr and taken into their beings both olfactorily and edibly.


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Written on June 29, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 29, 2022

Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 29, 2022

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