Analysis of Love

Cameron Rifkin 2006 (Florida)



You wait for me by my Class
I miss our talks from candlelight dinners
Your comforting smile brings me joy
The warmth of your hand holding mine

The words I love you echo in my heart
Feeling the soft touch of your lips
As volts of electricity course through my veins

My head resting gently on your lap
While we fall asleep peacefully by the fire
You called me when i was depressed
Your gentle voice calmed me

I miss our calls when you supported me
The phone stays on the table covered in dust
I still sit in my chair waiting
For you to answer the phone
So I could say I love you once more


Scheme XXXX XXX XXXA AXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1110111010 11001111 01111101 0111110011 10011111 11101001111 111010111 111011001010 11111101 110111 11101110101 01110101001 11101110 1111001 111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 589
Words 120
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 5
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This poem 3rd published in 2022. It is about romantic relationships, and loving someone who used to be with you. It is based on some of my relationships that turned out to be great and loving memories.

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Written on June 22, 2022

Submitted by rifkinlily on June 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Cameron Rifkin

I am a ninth grader who goes to high school, and I am 15 years of age. I have autism and adhd, this is who I am and I am proud to be me.When I get upset or feel alone I write poems, that help me realize i am not alone. My poems are based off of my experiences, I am happy to share my life with you. So here is my poem.... more…

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