Analysis of Waterfall

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



His hand fell down upon her head
As rocky was relationship
And down the dry fall from her eyes
On baby hip upon her eye
As fed the milk of calcium
Into their fall like bones
And bouncing off the hands and foot
There tiny waterfalls
And as the babe fell to the floor
His mother entered death
And soon there bones becomething
Upon a mountain bredth
To fall with elequent a white
Silk waters falling too
Like moonlight lit upon the wall
Into a mystic pool
For drinketh by a haven few
To understand moral they had grew
On witnessing the purest hue
A tree as fresh as lime could do
While cycling its feet free seed
To beg forgiveness and obtain
The others point of view
Afrom the light it emitted
To conscience between two
As deep debate did spark
An understanding they both knew
However long the mountain fell
Its own waterfall too
But remembered in the soul of rising angel falleth too into the heavens
Reversing the sinner
Pure as due
And fall did light again the path
A choice of 'true to you
As your bodies fall like waterfalls
Joining the battle too.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 1101010 01011101 11010101 11011100 011111 01010101 11010 01011101 110101 01111 010101 111101 110101 1110101 010101 1110101 10110111 11000101 01111111 11001111 11010001 010111 1011010 110011 110111 1010111 1010101 11101 1010001110101101010 010010 111 01110101 011111 11101110 100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,057
Words 204
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 852
Words per stanza (avg) 198
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Written on June 09, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 09, 2022

Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 09, 2022

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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