Analysis of Gated fences



Gated fences
ephemeral places of being
where nothing rests
amidst  its living lives

Effortless entery
into fading shadows of forever
invoke modes of knowing
toward transcending meaning

Mysterious ether in
music of the mind
remove the layers
to reveal what is

Awake unto itself
epiphany of existence
unified focus to
a universe unveiled

Deep accords within
the action of time and being
concentrated on the point
of expansion

Attentitive to its common chords
of worlds created from the
story of voices we journey  
through the music of our times
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Scheme XAXX BBAA CXXX XXXX CAXX XXXXB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1010 010010110 1101 011101 1001 011011010 011110 0101010 0100100 10101 01010 10111 011001 01001010 10101 01001 10101 01011010 100101 1010 111101 1101010 10110110 10101101 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 555
Words 96
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted by sunrasmoondog on June 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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