Analysis of I'm Sorry

Kenya Stephens 1995 (Van Wert)



Look, I don't mean to fuck up.
I don't plan to make you angry.
I never dreamed of being this way.
I'm sorry.
Please lower your voice, I know what I did wrong.
No please, don't be so mean.
Stop, you're scaring me.
I'm sorry.
Sorry that I say sorry a million times.
Even writing this my hands are shaking.
I can see your face right now.
Your eyes darker than your soul.
Nose scrunched.
Oh no, I'm sorry.
The freight is taking over me again.
Help me.
I don't know what to do.
I talk too much, too less.
Laugh too loud, laugh not enough.
I know I'm sorry.
What do you want from me?!
I'm so confused.
Broken.
Tell me what you want, and I'll do it.
Anything to make you happy again.
I promise I'll be better.
Yes, I'll cut them off.
You are right.
No, I'm... sorry.


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Characters 759
Words 179
Sentences 30
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 552
Words per stanza (avg) 151

About this poem

This was written in 2017 back when writing was my only safe place. It was a way I could get MY side of things out without being gaslight that it was all in my head.

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Written on February 03, 2017

Submitted by kenya_s on May 17, 2022

Modified by kenya_s on May 17, 2022

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