Analysis of Precipice



quickly racing flowing smooth
plane of glass unchanging be
reflects above bowl of blue
castles flying may be seen

bits of crystal in matrix tight
foraged in fire before time
buried deep beyond light
and forever it will be

born of fire burning hot
flying high wild and free
heat released into the night
forever lost flown away

endless tearing pulling free
denied not in relentless time
stone reduced and destroyed
bits of sand flow away

‘tis unchanged beyond sight
something that forever has
defined in frozen stone
unchanging like the earth and sky

rushing torrent falling free
flying high upon the breeze
flashing like crystal jewels
rainbows scattered in the light

pool deep of icy cold
turbulent currents flow about
massive stones buried within
now unchanging once again

endless time not frozen be
yet too slow for eye to see
crystals flash in flowing stream
pieces that time carries away

forever stood within the stream
parting breaking relentless be
bone of earth within the sky
as unchanging as flow of time

one too many does break free
crystal flashing torn away
tremble does so tiny be
minuet tremble growing be

tipping sliding breaking free
with the flow carried be
flight too brief it will be
till the moment it will end

quickly racing flowing smooth
plane of glass unchanging be
reflects above bowl of blue
castles flying may be seen


Scheme ABCD efeb xbeg bfxg exxh bxxe xxxx bbig ibhf bgbb bbbx ABCD
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 1110101 0101111 1010111 11100101 1010011 101011 0010111 1110101 101101 1010101 0101101 1010101 01100101 101001 111101 101011 1010101 010101 01010101 1010101 1010101 1011010 110001 111101 10010101 1011001 1010101 1011101 1111111 1010101 10111001 01010101 10100101 1110101 10101111 1110111 1010101 1011101 0110101 1010101 101101 111111 1010111 1010101 1110101 0101111 1010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,358
Words 242
Sentences 1
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by wakofoed on May 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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William A. Kofoed

William A. Kofoed was born in Logan Utah. He now lives in Magna Utah. He was a member of Mormon Youth Chorus and the Jay Welch Chorale. He is a published photographer. He started writing poetry in high school and he has been published in Poetry Quarterly, Utah Life and The Route 7 Review. more…

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