Analysis of A Br0ken W0rld
The World is tortured and broken
Hardened clay without a token
Here I lay within me a light
A happy day that’s very bright
I walk outside a showering storm
Everybody’s inside torn
The cries I haven’t given him
Makes him go beyond the limb
He says he’s lying for our lives
But deep inside I know he Thrives
The cries from people are his feast
And yet he treats us like we’re beasts
He aims for me our leader does
His hunger does become abuzz
My unbroken soul a happy light
In which he knows that he can not fight
He tries to fight but can not win
There are no tears that lay within
Because of his empty heart and soul
He loses the fight and gives back what he stole
The people are happy now and bright
All because that little fight
Now this place is bright and pearled
Instead of being a broken world
| Scheme | AABB XXCC XXXX DDBB EEFF BBBX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Quatrain (50%) |
| Metre | 01110010 10101010 11101101 01011101 111101001 1011 0111101 1110101 111101101 11011111 01110111 01111101 111110101 11010101 101010101 011111111 11111111 11111101 011110101 11001011111 010110101 1011101 1111101 011100101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 815 |
| Words | 164 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 24 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 106 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
About this poem
This poem is about a broken world soon saves by one person. When i was writing my poem "White Lights" she was writing this one, so full credits to Evelyn Wilson.
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