Analysis of My moon



The moon, It was beautiful, isn't it? Keep shining through someone in the darkest time, never let the emptiness feeling crept in until the sun comes out, with its light spreading and lighten every broken hearts.
She was my moon, so ridiculously beautiful and so hard to reach because I know, she was only meant to stare and appreciated. After all, the moon is a hundred miles away from earth.


Scheme AB
Poetic Form
Metre 011110010111011001011010100101001011111110010100101 111110100010001111011111101110010010101101010111
Characters 393
Words 71
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 156
Words per line (avg) 35
Letters per stanza (avg) 311
Words per stanza (avg) 70

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This poem about moon.. Or is it? Beautiful yet so far...

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Written on April 11, 2022

Submitted by athirahdubu on April 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Athirah Fadzir

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