Analysis of "Should i or should i not"



Whenever the time ticks
My heart beat rate encreases
The blood pumps aggressively as she talks
Her voice overrule and make me selfless

But should i rather confess now
After a while holding this rose
Perhaps its to early for her to know
Or am i obsessed by her ways

One day on an evening walk
I spotted a shiny star in my direction
Brigher than i thought
Yes that's an angel sent above in motion

She smiled,her teeth like diamond
Should i confess after a while longer
She was more gorgeous than i thought
Should i or should i not?


Scheme AAXX XXXX XBCB XXCX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 010011 11111 0110100111 011001110 11110011 10011011 0111101011 11101101 1111101 110010101010 1111 11110101010 111110 1101100110 11110111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 532
Words 105
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Simply complementary bases poem.A guy finds his soul mate and he finds it hard to confess the love he has for the girl.This was seen when he made his first approach in the second stanza and ended up being shy to confess and he made his second attempt in the last stanza.

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Written on May 05, 2022

Submitted by Rawlyn on May 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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