"Should i or should i not"



Whenever the time ticks
My heart beat rate encreases
The blood pumps aggressively as she talks
Her voice overrule and make me selfless

But should i rather confess now
After a while holding this rose
Perhaps its to early for her to know
Or am i obsessed by her ways

One day on an evening walk
I spotted a shiny star in my direction
Brigher than i thought
Yes that's an angel sent above in motion

She smiled,her teeth like diamond
Should i confess after a while longer
She was more gorgeous than i thought
Should i or should i not?

About this poem

Simply complementary bases poem.A guy finds his soul mate and he finds it hard to confess the love he has for the girl.This was seen when he made his first approach in the second stanza and ended up being shy to confess and he made his second attempt in the last stanza.

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Written on May 05, 2022

Submitted by Rawlyn on May 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXX XXXX XBCB XXCX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 532
Words 105
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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