Analysis of halcyon



I look out of the train,
The clouds are filled with rain,
All my sad thoughts go through a drain,
Now let me have a moment with the rain.

The train starts moving,
I can see all the bad thoughts outside,
Waving at me, bidding me farewell,
I wish them well.

As the journey continues,
I see someone serving tea,
My face lightens up with glee
Ah, what a delight.

As I admire the beauty outside,
The mountains and trees,
That comforting smell of grease,
I can feel my insides melting.


Scheme AAAA BCDD XEEX CXXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 111101 011111 11111101 1111010101 01110 111101111 10111011 1111 1010010 111101 1110111 11001 110101011 01001 1100111 11110110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 486
Words 108
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

it's just a warm thought, and a work of art. Credits to my imagination.

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Written on May 05, 2022

Submitted on May 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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