Analysis of Loving you
Lillian Valentine 2005 (Bryan)
Loving you is my downfall.
I sit here waiting fore your beckon and call.
God, I hate you.
The things you make me do.
I was unprepared.
A little girl, so scared.
You turned me into this.
A simple kiss.
You created me.
Can't you see?
You mess me up.
Slip your poison in my cup.
Stone-cold killer.
Loving you feels like being trapped in a chiller.
I can't breathe.
Theirs a devil behind your teeth.
How am I supposed to move on?
Something about you makes me always drawn.
I breathe you in.
I breathe you out.
This love is a sin.
Yet I have doubt.
| Scheme | AABBCCDDEEFFGGHIJKLMLM |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 101111 11110111001 1111 011111 1101 010111 111011 0101 10101 111 1111 1110011 1110 101111010010 111 10100111 11101111 100111111 1110 1111 11101 1111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 543 |
| Words | 128 |
| Sentences | 22 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 22 |
| Lines Amount | 22 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
| Words per line (avg) | 5 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 410 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 107 |
About this poem
Something I've been working on for a couple of days. Description of how it feels to love my ex.
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Written on April 27, 2022
Submitted by LillianV on April 29, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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