Analysis of Barefoot in the rain

whisper pattee 2009 (Preu)



Walking in the Rain
with no shoes
feeling the rain
between my Toes .

Walking down my street
I stepped in a puddle
I see a frog hopping away.
Rain was pouring down me
feeling the drops
trickle down my Legs.

Green Trees are everywhere
rainy and dark.
hair was damp and curly.
birds were singing and flying everywhere.  smells like Rain and coolness .


Scheme AXAX XXXBXX XXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 10001 111 1001 0111 10111 110010 11011001 111011 1001 10111 11110 1001 111010 101001010111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 361
Words 76
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

Outside is amazing

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Written on March 31, 2022

Submitted by Whisperr on April 12, 2022

Modified on April 25, 2023

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