Barefoot in the rain

whisper pattee 2009 (Preu)



Walking in the Rain
with no shoes
feeling the rain
between my Toes .

Walking down my street
I stepped in a puddle
I see a frog hopping away.
Rain was pouring down me
feeling the drops
trickle down my Legs.

Green Trees are everywhere
rainy and dark.
hair was damp and curly.
birds were singing and flying everywhere.  smells like Rain and coolness .

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Written on March 31, 2022

Submitted by Whisperr on April 12, 2022

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAX XXXBXX XXBX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 361
Words 76
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4

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