Analysis of Tongue-Tied



First time I saw you,
I wanted to talk to you.
I thought of what to say,
But all that came out was "hey."
Your reply was a simple little "hi,"
And then we had to say goodbye.

I still stop and think of the day,
When all I could muster was a sad little "hey."
I now know you're not that hard to talk to,
It's just so hard to get through
That first interaction,
And childish attraction.

But maybe if I never had been tongue-tied,
I never would've lied,
And said I didn't like you,
Which was really very untrue.
But now you're off with a girl much prettier than I,
Oh, if only I had never been so shy!


Scheme AABBCC BBAADD EEAACC
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1101111 111111 1111111 1011010101 0111111 11101101 111110101101 1111111111 1111111 11010 010010 11011101111 110101 0111011 11101001 1111101110011 11101110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 599
Words 140
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 149
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted by huskiesDAbest on April 11, 2022

Modified on April 12, 2023

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