Analysis of Sun



Space and Time
Flying in the sky
Flavor of the wine
Watching you say bye

The breaking of my heart
An incompatible feeling
Should we really be apart
Under this unbelievable ceiling

The earth, a remarkable place
Time and Space


Scheme XAXA BCBC DD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (50%)
Metre 101 10001 10101 10111 010111 10010010 1110101 101010010 01001001 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 226
Words 42
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

I titled it Sun because that's a drawing I doodled beside it. I enjoyed reading this poem out loud to my husband and son while listening to Don't Dream It's over by Crowded House

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Written on 2022

Submitted by cindyb.04512 on March 19, 2022

Modified on April 04, 2023

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