Sun



Space and Time
Flying in the sky
Flavor of the wine
Watching you say bye

The breaking of my heart
An incompatible feeling
Should we really be apart
Under this unbelievable ceiling

The earth, a remarkable place
Time and Space

About this poem

I titled it Sun because that's a drawing I doodled beside it. I enjoyed reading this poem out loud to my husband and son while listening to Don't Dream It's over by Crowded House

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Written on 2022

Submitted by cindyb.04512 on March 19, 2022

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BCBC DD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 226
Words 42
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2

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