Analysis of A Hug in the Kitchen



Approached by your slow stumble from behind,
Your darkness weighing you down like a boulder,
I felt your heavy touch and turned to find
Your dark-haired head there pressing on my shoulder.

I wrapped my arms around your burdened back
While yours just drooped and dangled by your side.
You leaned your body, wounded by today’s attack,
On me. I couldn’t hold you, but I tried.

I braced myself for your depressed collapse, and
Adjusted so that I could hold you longer.
My Love, when you’re worn out and cannot stand,
Just count on me and let me make you stronger.

That hug, there in the kitchen, bitter-sweet,
Felt like a win among the day’s defeat.


Scheme ABAB CDCD XBXB EE
Poetic Form
Metre 0111110101 11010111010 1111010111 11111101110 1111011101 1111010111 111101010101 111111111 1111101010 01011111110 1111110101 11110111110 1110010101 1101010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 657
Words 129
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on April 05, 2022

Submitted by purplepolarbear10735 on April 05, 2022

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Mikayla Taylor

Mikayla is a junior in college, majoring in Acting for the Stage and Screen and minoring in Creative Writing. She loves the performing arts and has a passion for directing and playwriting. She recently rediscovered her love for writing and began experimenting with poetry. She also loves drawing, painting, designing makeup, and doing anything artistic. more…

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