Analysis of No Control Over My Feelings



I can’t breathe,
I can’t cry.
I hide my feelings inside
And hope they’ll go away.
I feel so tired,
I feel so exhausted.
I don’t want to keep going
Because this battle is
Lasting much too long.
I can’t take this pain,
I just can’t save myself.
I can’t think,
I feel paralyzed.
I feel so numb
And I can’t handle this pain.
I feel like I’m about to break
Because my mind is screaming,
My heart is aching,
I’m slowly dying,
And I can’t do this.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNJOGGGP
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (35%)
Metre 111 111 1111001 011101 11110 111010 1111110 011101 10111 11111 11111 111 1110 1111 0111011 11110111 0111110 11110 11010 01111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 463
Words 103
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 327
Words per stanza (avg) 88
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Submitted by lonely-blue-sheep on April 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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